Published July 25, 2007
[Intro]
Fuck Rick Sr.
[Freestyle]
Guess who's back,
The best can't lack.
I'm back in the game,
Kyle Spratt's shit is lame.
You dissed Eminem, but your ass,
I'm riding for Shady, earning all your cash.
You got fired for stealing a phone,
Ha homie your boy can't make Kim moan.
There is no best, cause I'm not in the game,
No bitch we ain't the same.
Fuck with your soul like ether,
You don't want war with Shady, you don't want one with me neither.
The king is back,
Where's my crown at.
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Yes, this piece is very short. I don't really get the meaning of it, I guess it's just typical rap music, self praise and self promotion. You might want to add some meat to your rap, a little depth.
I'm sure this would sound better performed, but if it's a rap, there's very little too it. Try adding more.
hey u holla at ur boy and add mor to your songs......keep up the good work ^_^
This needs to be rated.